Reviews For Broken Hearts
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Reviewer: D P Patricks Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2015 08:42 pm Title: Broken Hearts

Nicely done, Nan! Welcome to the SH fandom, this is a great start to your participation. It was tense, well thought out and written (although I have an editor who would quibble with your multiple exclamations marks and use of caps <g>). Glad you finally got it 'down on paper.' Loved the ending!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, I sometimes think I should pry the excalmation key and he shift lock off my keyboard. Will work on that. Thank you again, and glad you enjoyed it. Working on a tag for this, but just can't get the guys and Geri to cooperate, but I will get them to. 

 

Reviewer: Spencer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2015 11:48 am Title: Broken Hearts

Hi there!  I enjoyed your story. Very angsty!  I loved the fact that both Starsky and Hutch instinctively felt that the other was alive.  I also liked your original character.  Welcome to the fandom! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Spencer. Was so hard to "let go" of one of my children. I am glad you enjoyed it. I can still see places where I could have beefed it up a bit. I have a tag in mind for this, so, when I get a chance to concentrate on  just THIS.. I will finish writing it and post it. Thank you, again!! 

 

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