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Reviewer: D P Patricks Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2016 03:08 pm Title: Kiss the Ice to Feel the Heat

Oh, dear, a continuing nightmare that he'd been the one to shoot Hutch, Very tense and taut, ks, not a single word too many. Just the right ones though: "Breathing each other in and out." Lovely. Thanks for writing it so well.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Pat. I edited this one a lot, to try to get it "just right". Your kind comments make me smile and make my heart happy!!     

 

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