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Reviewer: D P Patricks Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2016 03:13 pm Title: Between a Rock and a Hard Place

Ah, as sweet and lovely as the prequel, hbb.

"Instead, I scoot over a little so his head is on my shoulder. Then I rest my head against his, my hand against Ollie’s, and close my eyes again. 

Maybe like this, when we wake up, the world won't hurt quite so much."

I love your understanding of their relationship and the way your word choices are precise and perfect; never too many, nor too few. Thanks so much for this one, too!

 



Author's Response:

Now that's high praise indeed! Thank you so much; I very much appreciate your taking the time to read and comment xoxo

Reviewer: Dawnwind Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2016 11:29 am Title: Between a Rock and a Hard Place

Very realistic view of the morning after. sniff.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so :) Thank you!

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