This was beautiful! I admit I could not get this story out of my mind for a long time after reading. What they both endure, Starsky and his family, and Hutch for Starksy. And the patience and especially the love was woven through every scene. Again just beautiful!!
This was so awesome. I cried a little, as this brought up some memories of my mom's passing.
The way you portrayed the emotions Starsky goes through, and those Hutch experiences was absolutely brilliant. Beautiful work.
I'm also quite enamored with your prose, beautiful rhythm. Elegant and evocative, I love the way you made even the most heartbreaking of emotions flow. Each scene had its own flavor and I'm just... I'm running out of words!
Beautiful work. Just absolutely beautiful.