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Reviewer: StarskLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2015 03:16 pm Title: Captive

Oops!  I just realized I misread the first part w the blindfold.  My apologies!!!

Reviewer: StarskLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2015 03:15 pm Title: Captive

Love this story but at the start it says the captive partner is blindfolded but then it mentions the other parter commenting on his eyes.  I also think it wld be even more awesome if you never told which partner was which.  Instead of telling us at the end it's Hutch captive, I wanted it to be Starsky so if you just had the captive partner whisper the word "Partner" to the other letting him know he knew his identity - then H fans can imagine Hutch is the captive while S fans can imagine it as being Starsky.  Does that make sense?  Cz I loved how you didn't say who was who so I was bummed at the end when you did.  Love yr writing tho overall, I mean no negativity by this review :-)

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